So, I know that Zoe’s response in the first panel should be a question mark.

But the way teenagers respond like that don’t sound like questions. It’s a command. Her “what” is more “Get it over with.”

And so I went against grammatical rules to reflect that.

I mean, I make mistakes all the time. But this time it was on purpose!

↓ Transcript
Panel 1 -
Errol: Zoe, we need to talk.
Zoe: What.

Panel 2 -
Errol: I have bad news.

Panel 3 -
Errol: I can see by your expression you have an idea of what it is.

Panel 4 -
Errol: I'm working from home until April 2021. We'll be together forever!!
Zoe: WHY WON'T YOU EVER LEAVE?!


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