While writing this, the second panel had “Choy” instead of Joy. And then, I realized her mom wouldn’t call her “Choy”. I almost left it though, because lazy.

↓ Transcript
Panel 1 [Lola and Lola's house] -
Lola: Where did Joy go?
Leezet: I don't know! They were supposed to pick up a cake.

Panel 2 -
Lola: Now? It's so late?
Leezet: Let me check on my tracking app to see where Choy is?
Arrow pointing at Leezet: Anyone surprised at this?

Panel 3 -
Leezet: What? She's at the airport? Why is she getting a cake at the airport?
Arrow pointing at Leezet: With all the clues, is the surprise ruiined?

Panel 4 -
Leezet: Why?
Arrow pointing at Leezet: No.


5 comments

  1. Nothing. I suspected nothing. Despite millions of signs and obvious hints. I’m not a great detective and it shows you how well I do in escape rooms. But the reason why I never suspected it was because it is unimaginable to me that someone would spend money and take off work just to visit me for my birthday.

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